Comments on: La Casita Mexicana: The Magic of Mexican Cooking http://www.transmopolis.com/2009/10/la-casita-mexicana-the-magic-of-mexican-cooking/ Sat, 31 Dec 2011 14:40:46 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Gregg Max http://www.transmopolis.com/2009/10/la-casita-mexicana-the-magic-of-mexican-cooking/comment-page-1/#comment-373 Gregg Max Wed, 03 Mar 2010 22:24:16 +0000 http://www.transmopolis.com/?p=322#comment-373 Michael, I agree with Nikki. I think the opening sentence is the third one. That as an opening would have caught my attention. And she is right when she says, 'it is a really well written story' Then I expect nothing less from you. Thanks for this and others you have written. Is this the place we ate when we saw Frank Zappa's art? G Michael, I agree with Nikki. I think the opening sentence is the third one. That as an opening would have caught my attention. And she is right when she says, ‘it is a really well written story’ Then I expect nothing less from you. Thanks for this and others you have written.
Is this the place we ate when we saw Frank Zappa’s art? G

]]> By: Nikki http://www.transmopolis.com/2009/10/la-casita-mexicana-the-magic-of-mexican-cooking/comment-page-1/#comment-130 Nikki Tue, 27 Oct 2009 02:11:13 +0000 http://www.transmopolis.com/?p=322#comment-130 I think it's a really well-written story and done very colorfully. If I would do anything differently, I'd probably start the story with the description of the baskets of chips and mole in colors green, red and white. That would draw more readers in, since this is a food story. Also, I'd probably make the story shorter. Just seeing a lot of text made me hestitate to start reading, even though it was a well-written article. Nikki I think it’s a really well-written story and done very colorfully.
If I would do anything differently, I’d probably start the story with the description of the
baskets of chips and mole in colors green, red and white.
That would draw more readers in, since this is a food story.

Also, I’d probably make the story shorter.
Just seeing a lot of text made me hestitate to start reading, even though it was a well-written
article.
Nikki

]]> By: Lois Tonkin http://www.transmopolis.com/2009/10/la-casita-mexicana-the-magic-of-mexican-cooking/comment-page-1/#comment-124 Lois Tonkin Tue, 20 Oct 2009 20:52:46 +0000 http://www.transmopolis.com/?p=322#comment-124 Your review makes me long to travel to LA to eat at La Casita Mexicana! I love the idea that food is redolent with the mood and sensibility of the chef.I've always thought that myself.I'm perplexed by how sunflower seeds turn the mole red though? Your review makes me long to travel to LA to eat at La Casita Mexicana! I love the idea that food is redolent with the mood and sensibility of the chef.I’ve always thought that myself.I’m perplexed by how sunflower seeds turn the mole red though?

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